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Waiting For That Day
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 11:39:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Waiting For That Day
the day I will arrive
As I kiss her tender lips
my body begins to thrive
My hands are all over her
and hers are all over me
Oh, if only the two of us
could possibly be free
You can imagine what comes next
and what will go on for days
How many times we will make love
in all the imaginable ways
The love we have for each other
will blossom even more
We wish it was for a life time
but it is only for, four
Four enchanting, glorious days
and the time will go so fast
The two of us both wishing
it would last and last and last
We both have to survive
with the little time we get
Be sure that the two of us
not one minute, will we forget
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-10-18 23:39:41]
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Re: Waiting For That Day
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:17:03 AM AEST
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Wonderful hope you have a great time
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Waiting For That Day
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:01:42 AM AEST
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awwww Bruce, this is lovely, may your love contiune to blossom forever more,
love,
pixie xx |
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Re: Waiting For That Day
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:29:54 PM AEST
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leave it to a man to leave the clock ticking. tick tock tick tock! Did you set the alarm?? lol. Now I'm ticked off!!! Glad it's not me knowing I only get four precious days..
poor thing. #$%$$# |
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Re: Waiting For That Day
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by mylady on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:44:35 AM AEST
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Very nice.. At least you had her 4 day it must
of mean the world to you.. All i can do is dream.
mylady |
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