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Hollow, Dazed and Shattered
Contributed by
jesika
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:29:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Empty converstaions
Filled with empty words
Doesn't matter what you said
Doesn't matter what you heard
Dazed, broken and lost
Shuffled pointless moves
Doesn't matter what you do
In this game you always lose
Black and white and lonely
Grey and frightening skies
Old and messed up memories
Behind hollow, confused eyes
Crippled, cracked and forgotten
Left to rot in peace
The attempt to create good memories
Have unreluctantly ceased
Mean, unloved, and unloving
Cursed to the dying hour
How could this be the man
That once had so much power
Tossed away and shattered
Dumped faster than you know
Be there or be forgotten
Is what this goes to show
Copyright ©
jesika
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2004-10-19 01:29:32]
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Re: Hollow, Dazed and Shattered
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by unforgiven on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:59:39 AM AEST
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i realli like the poem...the emotion that comes through it with every word is overpowering. the desperation and despair is quite evident. keep writing these type of poems because they'r great!!
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