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ticking away..slowly stopping
Contributed by
cat_1
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 03:17:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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life was gud
and so much fun
sky so blue
yellow was the sun
no clouds
in ma sky
no tears
i wud cry
just laughter and smiles
it felt ok
for a while
no greyness above
and no rain
no teardrops
in ma heart no pain
loved life
did everything good
then one day
there was a thud.....
omg i thought
this aint me
the girl b4
was so free
now in prison
no one who cares
sleepless nights
full of nightmares
wots happening
i wud say in my bed
wots all this nonsene
thats stored in ma head
why am i different
and why have i changed
wot i acheived
and wot have i gained
just lonliness and guilt
thas now within me
no one can realsie
no one can see
they think its attention
tha i seek from myself
can they not see
im ruining my health
my bodys just dieing
so slow and so calm
noone even knows
i dont feel the warmth
i try with this battle
i try with my might
to show others
i dont want lose this fight
but i beleive
tha they think that i like
but its wrong and nasty
wish it wud take a hike
let me be peaceful
let me begin
to live a happy life
and not ful of sin
i feel like a clock
just tickin away
livin life on the edge
with nothing to say
the battery inside of me
is losing its power
just ticking so slowly
minute by hour
wot will they do
i think all the time
if i die
or if i survive
the pains getting stronger
i feel its my fault
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2004-10-19 03:17:00]
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Re: ticking away..slowly stopping
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by LouisaMontagu on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 06:03:15 AM AEST
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| wow i luv this, i hope it is jus words but if its how ur feelin rem lifes too short to get down n out, read sum ov my lyrics if ya like, u may comprehend!! take care xxx |
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Re: ticking away..slowly stopping
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:52:56 PM AEST
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| the only fault in this is you short cut words. |
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