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Lost In The Mist
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 10:34:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I have been cast into the mist,
Walked right into hates clenched fist,
Blow after blow I become so numb,
I have no strength left to try & run.
For years I have been very lost,
Into oblivion I have been tossed,
Long forgotten, broken & battered,
Like a pane of glass thats been shattered.
I cant see the way that I should go,
It seems my river has lost its flow,
Where can I go to whom can I turn?,
When I feel my heartache start to burn.
Why is there nobody here for me?
I need a bit of help can no-one see?
I am invisible to the rest of the world,
I am now just a ghost of a girl.
As the mist gets thicker I begin to panic,
My actions become unhinged & manic,
My scream gets caught inside my throat,
All my demons begin to gloat.
As I spiral down & down,
My bones shatter as I hit the ground,
All I can hear is the sound of loneliness,
Everything around me is such a mess.
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pixie
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2004-10-19 10:34:58]
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Re: Lost In The Mist
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:00:30 AM AEST
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| this leaped out to me because I relate I also liked the flow of your words and the way you ended the poem by breaking the rhyme |
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Re: Lost In The Mist
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:09:33 AM AEST
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| sad but beautiful. I hope you know what a talent you have..? |
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Re: Lost In The Mist
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:16:40 AM AEST
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I hope you read my post today about finding the way out of my own fog. I needed someone much stronger and all-knowing to lead me out. I know the feelings you discuss here. I have been there. I'll say a prayer for you today.
Stitch |
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Re: Lost In The Mist
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:23:28 AM AEST
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| Pixie you have commented so often on my little poems that I wish there was some way for me to help you. This poem speaks of deep depression. May you have the guidance that you are so obviously seeking. Hugs from bernard. |
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