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I Remember
Contributed by
sabrina
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Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 01:52:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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I remember the songs you used to dedicate to me. How they used to fit so perfectly. I remember the way you used to look at me and say you loved me. I forget how we let it go, how it slipped through our fingers so uncontrollably. I forget why we stopped talking. Also why our love wasnt enough. How letting you go of you was so tough I miss the way I used to feel when you would come near me. I miss the feeling of being loved. I miss the touch of your skin. I miss the looks on your face. The love was there, the love was strong... But sometimes for some reasons, love isn't fair, and the love is gone.
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Re: I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 04:59:50 PM AEST (User
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I remember, too.
This told me what I believed only I knew already, which is why I personally think its the best love poem I've read in a long time...
So, Sabrina - are you going to start dishing out the comments, or what?
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