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-Come Back-
Contributed by
starryskyez09
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:10:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit here and wonder,
Why my life is like this,
And the reason,
That you did this to me.
Everything was fine,
And nothing was wrong,
But then one day,
You left me....you were gone.
I wish you were back here,
Because I miss you so much,
What did I do to cause this?
How did I start this whole mess?
But now that your gone,
I have no reason to live,
I have nothing to look forward to,
Or someone who will be there for me in the end.
Please come back,
I'm begging you to,
I'm hurting inside,
And I think you might be too.
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starryskyez09
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2004-10-19 17:10:03]
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Re: -Come Back-
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:14:45 PM AEST
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| This scares me...mainly because I had a very similar experience a week back. Thankfully the person that left *glares at that person for leaving* came back, because she realized there was no point in hurting both of us. But man...it really really does hurt to have a friend leave. This poem describes everything I was feeling and thinking when it happened. Very Very good. |
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Re: -Come Back-
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by Yousef on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 06:21:15 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poem, well written and well presented, very emotional too, I liked the finale "Please come back, I'm begging you to, I'm hurting inside, And I think you might be too.", I recommend reading my poem "Come Back To Me", the same issue, the same story, the same mess... |
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