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Cold Indifference
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:17:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Swallowing my despondency
I conjure up a smile
Telling you its all aright
But I can only stay awhile
You absently nod your head
Oblivious to my dismay
Place a cold kiss upon my cheek
And fervently clear the way
Forcing myself to react
I lift my leadened feet
Knowing this to be the last time
My heart shall ever beat.
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cuddlytiger17
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2004-10-19 19:17:02]
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Re: Cold Indifference
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 09:28:26 PM AEST
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Wonderfully descriptive. I liked this one. It's filled with such emotion.
Great write!
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Re: Cold Indifference
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 09:41:12 PM AEST
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Ohhhhh CT.... I like this, too. Your voice is sooo clear... your emotions evident. Nicely, nicely done!
You have a fan!
SNM |
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