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SOS
Contributed by
poemwritingdude
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:29:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Newsflash, a beautiful suicide
those who won't remember
and never forgot,
mourn the grave of he who is not known,
don't shed a tear,
there's no one here,
and you won't change a thing...
stop talking,
be silent,
you love to give out thoughtless sympathy,
it's your favorite weapon,
a nicer way of saying
you'll never make it,
better off if you stopped trying to feel right...
all alone,
hole punched through the door,
he sits home alone,
tired and depressed,
all alone,
fakes a smile,
don't forget to ignore it...
These skies are painted red,
bold lies smeared across the back of your hand,
I'm looking up,
hopeful for everything,
hopeful for something,
anything...
These skies are painted red,
bold lies smeared across the back of your hand,
I'm looking up,
S.O.S. call
drowning out....
Copyright ©
poemwritingdude
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2004-10-19 19:29:50]
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Re: SOS
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by blackholesun on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:42:04 PM AEST
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| oh i liked it deffinate artistry to your poem it reminds me of the type of poems jim morrison would write,keep up the good work and i will keep reading! |
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Re: SOS
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:57:03 AM AEST
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| this iz wonderful!! i love it!! |
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Re: SOS
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:39:32 PM AEST
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| Great poem, good imagery. |
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