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I Saw Him
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I saw him the other day,
the one who first stole my heart.
It has been such a long time now
that we have been apart.
When I saw him standing there,
my heart skipped a beat.
I felt a little dizzy,
and unsteady on my feet.
When I looked into his big blue eyes,
the memories began.
Memories of our times together
back when he would reach out for my hand.
I did not know what to say,
so I just hugged him real tight.
Having him in my arms again
felt so very right.
He asked me how I had been doing,
and I told him I was okay.
He said that he was better now,
though for awhile he had lost his way.
We stood there for a silent moment,
I guess each reliving the past.
Remembering a relationship
that some how couldn't last.
Then our silent moment was broken,
when a woman appeared at his side.
He reached out for her hand,
and introduced her as his bride.
I held back my tears,
reached out and shook her hand.
While thinking that I should be the one
wearing his wedding band.
She said they had to be going,
that they had a busy day.
When she walked off he took me in his arms,
and brushed my tears away.
He said, "I still love you,
but I guess it is to late."
Yes, his marrying another
had completely sealed our fate.
I told him I would always love him,
about that I could not lie.
I took his face in my hands,
and forever kissed his lips goodbye.
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ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-16 12:40:00]
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Re: I Saw Him
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by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 01:44:08 PM AEST
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This is so sad in a way, yet
deceiving, it's hard when someone
we know we deeply loved steps
back into view if only for a few seconds
and how the memories flow, this also
shows a bit of temptation for adultry
on his part, as the kiss should have
never happened, but that's just my
opinion if this was real, Thanks
for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: I Saw Him
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 01:50:55 PM AEST
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This poem is very real. I know I shouldn't kissed him, but it wasn't really planned. Besides I would NEVER consent to being some ones mistress. I believe marriage is too sacred for that. I don't want to be the other woman anyway. I want a man of my own. And I am very much in love with some one else, whom I am trying to build a relationship with, and I wouldn't do anything to jeopardize that. Thanks for yout comment.
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Re: I Saw Him
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:38:53 AM AEST
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Lovely write..so sad...but very beautifully written.... I loved it...
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Re: I Saw Him
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:54:17 AM AEST
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This is excellent Candice,
I'm not looking forward to when this inevitably happens to me in the future with the one I love still! But I guess it could give me some kind of closure, does it?? Please say yes it does!!
With love
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Re: I Saw Him
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:27:17 AM AEST
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Dean, yes for me at least it has brought me closure. It has also made me feel like I should really go for it with the guy I love now. Running into the guy this poem was about was kind of painful at first because he was not only and ex-boyfriend, he was my ex-fiance. It kind of hurt to see him married to someone else especially when I'm not even in a relationship right now. But I think that it was for the best because it has driven me to follow my heart instead of listening to the doubts I have in my head. In my heart I doubt nothing about the man I love. Thank you for your comment.
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