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Where were you?
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Where were you?
Where were you when
I searched you
in the sunset
of a velvet rose?
I could turn
my sadness
into song and poem,
my freedom
into seagulls flies
over boundless oceans
in storm.
Where were you?
Where were you when
I saw myself
in the mirror,
bleeding and screaming
your name
to the dead stars?
I could tease myself,
fool my mind
and kill
in an only moment
that smile
of fire
those looks
of wood
and those small hands
that brushed
in an only gesture
mine.
Where were you?
Where were you when
I defied
a thousand dangers
and overpassed
the frontiers of my
difficult shiness
whispering to you
I LOVE YOU...?
Copyright ©
LostDream
... [
2002-11-16 13:40:00]
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Re: Where were you?
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 01:50:00 PM AEST
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This is so sad, i can relate to this
all to well, and it's such a dark feeling
that one get's when feeling alone in
this place of destruction and anger
and pain that feels like there is no
escape, Thanks for sharing this one
It really hit home with me
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Where were you?
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by olasunkanmi on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 04:38:06 PM AEST
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| It really sad I share your fellings. |
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