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I try to imagine him
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Today the sun doesn't want to shine
he's honest so he said goodbye.
He left his place to an awful rain
the sky is sad like me today.
I sit on my bed and my eyes are still
God only knows the way I feel.
My tears reflect the image of him
the sweetest thing I have ever seen.
I can't wake up,my body is dead
he doesn't know he makes me so sad.
Tears now cover my face
Oh,God,I think it's too late.
My heart is a broken box
it contains a thousand hawks
they might fly over me
then I'll dive into the sea.
I try to imagine him
in his bedroom without me.
I try to imagine him right now
I see him,face on the ground.
He fell by his bed
he looks like a mad.
I know he was dreaming about me
I know cause he always does it.
I'm the master of his dreams
I can see anything.
He knows perfectly he wants me
but he doesn't want to say this.
I still try to imagine him.
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LostDream
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2002-11-16 14:20:00]
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Re: I try to imagine him
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 11:13:32 PM AEST
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This was a very sad & touching write!
So sorry for you! Great peice! Christina |
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Re: I try to imagine him
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:34:14 AM AEST
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Heartfelt and touching....
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Re: I try to imagine him
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:56:51 PM AEST
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| I like your poem is was good nicely done. |
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