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law of life
Contributed by
rubytears
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Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:39:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is like Quicksand
no matter how hard you
STRUGLE it sucks you in .
you strugle harderand harder
and you are just brought down deeper
and deeper
Should you give up and scream for help?
No you keep strugling on your own.
So you keep stuggling with life
working at your problems because,
well, there YOUR PROBLEMS,
when u realize you're up to ur neck in Quicksand
Sturgle and strugle, you continue to strugle
as your nose is covered in Quicksand
you stretch up try to scream
but its too late
your covered in Quicksand from head to toe.....
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rubytears
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2004-10-20 14:39:38]
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Re: law of life
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by rubytears on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 08:01:36 PM AEST
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Re: law of life
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by Stitch on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:13:30 AM AEST
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You might struggle with the dictionary or spellcheck before you post. I'll admit though that it's an interesting first effort. It's a big subject, and you've had the guts to tackle it. Try not to repeat words though if you can.
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