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Innocence Lost
Contributed by
TheVampireClaudia
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:02:41 PM in AEST
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She is heartbreakingly beautiful and child-like in your eyes,
But you don't see into her soul,
The way I do;
Blood taints that perfect Cupid's bow that is her lips
And death clouds her once innocent vision,
Making only hatred visible,
Seeing through the eyes of a killer;
But is she evil?
Of coarse she is!
Just take a look at those cold black eyes,
Staring from under her raven curls,
As she slowly takes the life from you,
A wicked smile playing on her lips,
Soon you will be another one of her many victims,
Lying white and bloodless on the floor.
Copyright ©
TheVampireClaudia
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2004-10-20 16:02:41]
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Re: Innocence Lost
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by CaddishCut on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:27:22 PM AEST
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| Keep them coming. You keep on astounding me more and more with each poem of yours I read. I am very impressed. |
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Re: Innocence Lost
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 11:12:24 PM AEST
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| Intrigueing style, colorful images, powerfully written cool poem. |
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