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Claudia
Contributed by
TheVampireClaudia
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:04:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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With the face of an angel
And a voice like a bell
And a head full of long golden hair
She was anyone's dream
With her white skin a-gleam
And you'll find not a soul that's more fair
She was a vision of beauty
A living dream
She should never have died so young
Such a pretty face such a timeless smile
And such sweet word were formed on her tounge
And I would give up the world If could just see
The sun shine in her locks just one time
The ruby red of her lips and their soft silken kiss
And peace at last would be mine
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TheVampireClaudia
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2004-10-20 16:04:34]
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Re: Claudia
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by CaddishCut on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:12:00 PM AEST
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| This is such a beautiful work of art. You show much promise as a young poet, just from this here poem I read. |
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Re: Claudia
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:45:42 PM AEST
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Yes...very promising write....
Keep it up..
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Re: Claudia
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:02:13 PM AEST
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I think you discovered Anne Rice and you are fascinated with Claudia but be careful about plagerism. Being 13 will not keep you out of courts.
Rita |
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Re: Claudia
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by Maygee on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 12:32:00 PM AEST
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| I very much enjoyed the poem. Nice flow and nice wording :) |
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