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oceans
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I listen to the oceans quietly whispering your name
And I dig my toes into the black sand
Im surrounded by the rain and I can see the lightning
And Im laughing because nobody understands.
Then wind whistles around my head and I hear it scream for you
I feel so cold but I burn inside
Just the thought of you can make me smile
Its creating a storm in my wild eyes
I look up, I close my eyes to the pouring rain
My tears are mingled with the golden drops fallen on my face
I cry, I shout your name as loud as I can
But my voice is lost within the rolling waves
I collapse in a heap in this desolate, black place
I know no one sees me, im all alone
It feels like everything was for nothing
And I cant go through with this on my own
I look up to the heavens as the rain beats down
And I try to picture your beautiful face
But I can see nothing now, I dont remember
And all I want is to be out of this place
See Im doing this for you, and for you alone
Im lying here because you let me go
You left me, and you went somewhere Ill never be
I reached for the stars, but youll never know
Copyright ©
wyrd_faerie
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2002-11-16 16:00:00]
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Re: oceans
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by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 04:14:30 PM AEST
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This is so sad, hope your not
thinking of doing anything hurtful
to yourself, I can relate alot to this
poem, I'd like to read more of your
poetry, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: oceans
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by lost_word on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 05:48:29 PM AEST
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great write, very sad. killing yourself is a crazy thought to me..
plz drop a comment on something i wrote. |
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Re: oceans
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:20:55 AM AEST
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| you have pretty writing. |
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Re: oceans
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by darkeyedman on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 06:19:45 PM AEST
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| i could feel my chest constricting as i read this. i'm glad i found it. another good one, keep it up! |
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Re: oceans
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by Darkscorpio on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 04:48:09 PM AEST
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| Very well written. Promise yourself, that you will never give anyone the satisfaction of seeing you dead. If you live just to spite humanity, you will win in the end. I was once in the darkness your soul is now, or was. I hope things get better, and I hope you survive. |
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Re: oceans
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 03:23:56 PM AEST
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Wow, Lucie amazing loved the imagery of you laughing because no one understands. Excellent like always.
Love you,
Joel |
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Re: oceans
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by wordsmith on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 02:42:41 PM AEST
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| With such a special way of experiencing and expressing yourself, you must have a very meaningful spiritual path to follow. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: oceans
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:42:40 AM AEST
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Hey hon,
This is truely beautiful... have just been reading it over and over and there are new things each time...
xx liss |
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