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broken
Contributed by
the_fallen
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:25:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I lay down on the ground
Trying to find the pieces of our love,
Trying to find the pieces of my heart
Our love will never be repaired
I look up and see you fading away, reaching out your hand
I get up to run to you, but you continue to fade
As I get closer, you get farther
You told me to stop and so I did
Is it really true?
Is our love really gone?
Im nothing without you
Our love is too far, we cant reach each other
Is this the day?
I cant think anymore
Im only a broken piece of your memory
You come closer and me a hug
I start to cry in your arms, but. Youve already gone
I am nothing just a broken girl with a broken heart
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the_fallen
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2004-10-20 19:25:51]
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Re: broken
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:31:41 PM AEST
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I like the way you worked
with the broken pieces and
ultimately the broken girl
with a broken heart.
--Mothy |
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Re: broken
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by lovelyhatred08 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:40:10 PM AEST
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wow that was really wierd... i put in the search broken and i read this first. I don't know how it happened, but that poem basically explains almost everything I'm feeling right now. Like I'm the broken girl with the broken heart. I just got dumped and he wanted another girl. He keeps drifting farther away and wow... that poem just really got to me
thanks
Kylie |
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Re: broken
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:59:48 PM AEST
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| good write, felt it all the way through |
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Re: broken
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by Saz on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 05:40:44 AM AEST
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| I love this!! It's so true in so many cases!! Congrats for really sucking out the inner feelings of the broken girl. |
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