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Never Forget
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:42:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I knew, before I saw
That stiffened figure
Legs outstretched.
Perhaps if I hadnt overslept
Would an hour have made a difference?
Maybe there was something
I could have done?
Those short, seven hours of sleep
Ironic how I awoke and he did not.
Just throw everything away
As if he were never here
Go ahead and purge this household
Of his very existence.
The only thing left to signify
His former presence:
Dusty cans of food
Perched upon a shelf.
This silence is deafening
Walls screaming of this loss
A small, seemingly insignificant
Soul forever lost
Never to utter a soothing murmur again.
You may have forgotten,
But I know I never will.
Copyright ©
cuddlytiger17
... [
2004-10-21 10:42:44]
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Re: Never Forget
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:04:01 AM AEST
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a hug and smile for you
life is just too cruel sometimes
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Never Forget
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by irishgirl812 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:46:36 PM AEST
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| I'm so sorry to hear about your kitten. This poem makes me just grab my kitty and hug him. Very heartfelt. Even though you only had him 3 weeks, they grow on you and I feel your pain. |
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Re: Never Forget
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 04:58:24 PM AEST
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sorry about your kitten, one of my dogs died recently when i went to do dishes, i had just been with him, i thought the same thing as you, if only, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Never Forget
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:11:30 PM AEST
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Saddest poem I've ever read.
Reminds me of my cat, Tetsuo,
who chose me. He died a year
later inexplicably. He was very smart
and energetic. When he was gone,
it was the first time I'd ever felt
the loss of a soul.
--Mothy |
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