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my lil guitar pick
Contributed by
dantoad
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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yelling. you hear it through the walls.
crying, tears fall.
and i remember waking up
after dreaming of the blu haired boy
who is moving but keepin in touch.
i see that guitar pick
on the ground, and i pick it up
reminds me of him, of the dreams i shouldn't get
but do
and the mistakes i made
keep makin to this day
and i put it down
another dream deep fried, gone away
like everything else it has disappeared
u run through my dreams
all of you
with your crazy ideas and i have gotten lost again
don't try to handle me
i hate that when u say u get lost in my eyes
u lie so bad
and i cry again
at night u have me doin that
but i will survive
and i thank you
for helping me
because i never used to feel
and u make me do
all of you.
nov 2002
Copyright ©
dantoad
... [
2002-11-16 22:00:00]
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Re: my lil guitar pick
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by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:40:39 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully sad
I really anjoyed this one, Thanks
for sharing it, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: my lil guitar pick
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 10:57:44 PM AEST
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| very touching words i liked this! Christina |
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Re: my lil guitar pick
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 08:48:49 AM AEST
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i actually seem to understand where u are coming from, wish u well.
**a friend** |
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