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what a love i did.......................
Contributed by
veenu
on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:32:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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empowered with your love,
i felt so well,
a anonymous love u want,
i understand,
thought u will made my life wonderland,
u will mine ,
like a addict in wine,
and now u replie,
that i have fly so high,
my love so soft u beated so hard,
felt like a joker in playing card,
other impression are short lived my love is imortal,
what a love i did,
the things(you)watched by me now watched by other,
the love i supposed to find by you,
now u flow for other,
so helpless i watch everything,
with rock eyes observe the trend,
surprise of what r u ment.
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veenu
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2004-10-22 00:32:12]
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Re: what a love i did.......................
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:26:09 PM AEST
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that i have fly so high,
my love so soft u beated so hard,
felt like a joker in playing card,
these lines i like and relate to |
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Re: what a love i did.......................
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by abhay on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 12:03:41 AM AEST
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going good
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