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Hope for Help
Contributed by
lovesucks
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:01:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Please tell me I'll be okay
Please don't leave, please stay
Please show me
Please let me see
Please I need someone to listen
This demon I hear him whisperin'
Please tell me why he's here
Please hold me, I feel him near
Please don't let me go
Please don't leave, I have to know
Why? Why? What did I do?
Please don't go all I have is you
What should I say?
Where should I go?
So this demon cannot find my soul
Please, Please I hear it again
This demon is whisperin'
Why do I still hear him
His voice so deep, so grim
Oh God....I hear him again
Please, please, make it stop
I pray to you, to my knees I drop
I surrender
I pray
For you to guide me in your ways
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Re: Hope for Help
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by Catalina on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:16:36 PM AEST
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Awsome write! I can totally relate. You should submit some stuff like this to the clean sheet. You are really talented.
Love ya- Christie |
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Re: Hope for Help
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 08:49:52 AM AEST
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| I will be hear for you if you need be but unfortunately most peopl,e on this planet only look out for themselves. This is a great poem! |
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