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Children Of The Forest
Contributed by
immortal_pain
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:33:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Once apon dark times,
Children were left to suffer,
Left to die,
Abandoned with no one,
But each other.
Exiled to the forest,
Left to despair,
Forgotten,
No one really cared.
They bled such blood,
T'was red as the sea,
Their cuts grew bigger,
Their scars grew deep.
Locked up in a room,
With no escape,
Time consumed them,
They had no fate.
Time grew slow,
They suffered long,
Before they knew it,
All was gone.
They fell deeper and deeper,
Though time was never fast,
They suffered sadness,
Forgot the past.
All was no more,
Frowns were all they knew,
Couldn't remember how to smile,
Their skies were always blue.
These children were young,
Though their faces now bare,
Knifes slit their skin,
They were almost not there.
Fading with time,
Losing their essence,
A confused mind,
But stood with no presence.
The days went by,
Weeks turned into months,
And no one remembered,
All children were done.
No more smiles,
No more laughs,
What once was,
May never come back.
Lost in the forest,
Where it rained blood,
No more mind,
No more love.
Poor children they were,
No one ever understood,
About the burden they bore,
And no one ever would.
Stranded in the forest,
It was like a large box,
Forever damned,
Forever lost.
All was gone,
And there was no more,
No friends or happiness,
Their hearts were torn.
Their time ran out,
Their time was near,
And one by one,
They disappeared.
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immortal_pain
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2004-10-22 11:33:56]
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Re: Children Of The Forest
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:57:03 PM AEST
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| Awesome rythem, though a freaky poem, leaving me feeling cold inside, still a cool write, full of mystery. |
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Re: Children Of The Forest
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:32:02 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful..... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Children Of The Forest
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by veenu on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 04:02:24 AM AEST
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its really good write but can u tell me the theme of the poem in brief nice poem............
keep sharing
naveen |
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Re: Children Of The Forest
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by immortal_pain on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:13:55 AM AEST
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The poem really about a child that the world forgott. They left her to die, with out even relizing it. And when they finally they did... it was too late.
thx alot for the ocmments guys^_^ |
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