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Black Rose
Contributed by
thederangedcivilian
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:31:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I stand by her lifeless corpse
My sensation of time dramatically warps
Her long black hair
Her spidery and tattered black dress
All draped over her sprawling figure
Then I see two telltale traces of blood on her wrists
Nothing could have separated us, nothing but this
So subtle and divine
So shy and satanic
My love, true love
I weep silent tears, leaving black traces sliding down my cheeks
I walk to the garden, pick a flower and to me it speaks
One flower
A symbol of our love
Of my everlasting love
As I creep out of the shadows and onto the moonlit ruin
Her skin, pearly white glows eerily in the pale light of the full moon
I lean over and lay gently
Upon her chest
The black rose
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2004-10-22 12:31:40]
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Re: Black Rose
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:36:03 PM AEST
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| Awesome write, nice rythem, crystal clear images painted, and vivid story unfolding before my eyes, cool poem. |
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Re: Black Rose
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by pixie on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:49:00 PM AEST
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a great write, it was worth the time you took on it,
pixie xx |
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Re: Black Rose
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by a_bear on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 01:48:29 PM AEST
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| I always try to comment when someone asks..your poem made pictures in my mind and goose bumps on my arms.. I'm going for a sweater now. (smile) |
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Re: Black Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 01:58:24 PM AEST
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loved it:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Black Rose
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:30:20 PM AEST
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| amazing and powerful write. |
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Re: Black Rose
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by veenu on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 03:52:01 AM AEST
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thats very much fine,,,,,but true love ..........is very very much dangerous if u cant find ur love
keep sharing god bless u |
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