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lost inside
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 01:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my feelings i hide
my dreams ive lost
my face hidden in shame
IM ALL OVER THE PLACE
grabbing my soul
i run
to a place where i wont be remembered
just forgotton
not even a whisper on the wind
i close my eyes
and i dream for so long
i must be dead
someone must be holding my hand...even if it isnt my love
God might hold me
ive craved someones love
pretended or not
i open my eyes
im standing alone
maybe if i close them again
ill dream and ill die
the poison in my heart will slowly kill me
and ill fly
up in the sky
were the rims of heaven meet the world
i will find peace
inside and out
my head shakes
my heart stops
my mind ceases
and the poison doesnt hurt
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2004-10-22 13:42:35]
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Re: lost inside
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by nail-to-the-head on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 01:47:41 PM AEST
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great write, i like this!
+ nail-to-the-head + wishing life was more simple |
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Re: lost inside
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:43:32 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: lost inside
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 05:26:04 AM AEST
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Great write.
You even had me covered in that blanket of sadness.
Take care
Steve |
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