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Lovers Suicide
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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FRiens everyone called these two.
Neither one of them know what to do, their parents would be furious if they heard this non-sense.
So every night the ach made a wish, both longing for each others kiss.
They met secretly every night, yielding their passion for just another life.
Because here they cannot be plain, if they found out that they were in love, her mother would cruify her knight in armor.
One night they secretly met, and he brought the knife.
EAch taking their loves life.
Laying ina pool of blood when they were found, no one but them the two in love around...
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2004-10-22 16:41:07]
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Re: Lovers Suicide
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:50:30 PM AEST
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I love this. Very Romeo & Juilet. Short and simple, but it hits hard. Great job.
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Re: Lovers Suicide
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by Crash on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:07:09 AM AEST
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| this poem is soo good i reread it like 5 times! i agree, very romeo and juliet, but in my opinion even better |
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Re: Lovers Suicide
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by -Lord-Vince-Black- on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:36:00 AM AEST
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Just like the 2 others say,
Very Romeo and Juliet,
But even better,
Only what I cant reach is,
If you love someone so much to kill yourself for it,
I couldn't end his or her life...
But thats my way of thinking..
Have a nice life,
Lord Vince Black |
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