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Pain 2
Contributed by
Kericka
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 06:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears have fallen, my eyes have dried, overcame loneliness and so hard I tired. The phone is put out of my reach, things I've learned in life you can't teach. Your beautiful smile, your gentle touch, getting over and on with my life hurts too much. I fear that there will never come a day, that an angel will take me far away. Away from this life and its sorrow, no more worries of where I live tomorrow. Lessons I've learned day by day, friends and family left and very few did stay. Everyone I put first, God forgive me for treating them worst. You can't undo deep pain, moving on and accepting fate of small gain. I abandoned God and ended up empty handed, the wrong will be right if I do what he commanded. I don't love you like I used to, don't doubt for I still care, and I do what I have to do. That soldier is one I can't follow, pain, bloodshed, dead ahead, my heart won't wallow. I am done wishing you were here, the destiny of my soul should be my only fear.
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Re: Pain 2
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 07:12:41 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. i loved the ending. |
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Re: Pain 2
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by girish on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST
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| nice write good wishes to rejoin |
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Re: Pain 2
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by Gimpie on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:25:29 PM AEST
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| This is really good. Wonderful write. |
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