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The Luckiest Man Alive - The Husband
Contributed by
thewordzwithin
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:13:55 PM in AEST
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He loves me, I know he does and no one can convince me otherwise
I can see it every time I look into his eyes
I know he does what he does because he loves me
He does what he does because hes above me
The physical pain I feel is nothing compared to the pain I cause him
He said my friends talk too much
So I no longer hang out with them
Hes the one that works everyday, so I must be willing to give him what he expects
Which is a hot meal on the table
Immediately after sex
Every chance I get I treat him like a king
No other woman is fit to wear this wedding ring
I cook and I clean and I take care of his kids
But I cant move too well because I got a set of broken ribs
It was all my fault honest; Im telling the truth
Which is why I wont do it again
Or hell throw me off the roof
Is what he said
All I did is talk back to him
And he threw me on the bed
He ripped off my clothes and forced himself inside
It hurt so bad, I thought I was going to die
But that was the past and he said he didnt mean it
My blood was on the floor and he told me to clean it
Up
Thats him, Ill talk to you later
Dont worry Mom when it comes to our love, theres nothing greater
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Re: The Luckiest Man Alive - The Husband
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by thewordzwithin on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:22:14 PM AEST
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| I wanted to write two poems that dealt with apperication in two different ways and two different situations. Please read both and tell me what you think.... |
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Re: The Luckiest Man Alive - The Husband
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by SharonAngel on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:31:40 AM AEST
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| I found it very sad and depressing, mainly because i know women like that...that let's their husbands walk all over them....u captured the true feeling of what it must be like to be controlled. |
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