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My lonely Call
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
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Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My call My ravine call I noise it,but couldn't go pass me though the thief pass me by Carting away the whiteness of my eyes My view of pride I used to be,the cedar tree, cornea of the eyes mellow in the cluster of fruit floating in the deep blue sea stem around me like a cluster of flower on a branch feeding mouth to mouth just like the caring bird to the nestling not until my hidden was uncovered cedar tree, not by my lips lost its chlorophyll the cornea_the lachrymal-glands My fir,clover for the cattles sinking in the other side of the sea tongue-in tongue-out As if the weasel cares never cares the mimic of the tortise pronounce its handfull of destruction Hum! judas of this world,web of evil tenuity the quiet cave their beam is just like the morning star once the cloud open it goes subsiding for the next prey to devour
olasunkanmi rasheed igbalajobi kanmmy2@YAHOO.COM
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Re: My lonely Call
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:18:18 AM AEST (User
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Some men are evil and are only out to devour and this is sad but there are women out there who do this same thing as well....i like the last line here in your poem where it saays subsiding for the next prey to devour.....did you know that on alot of my yahoo names that i have .....that the quote on my names say "let us prey"...now that's weird huh? lol....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...and i understand where your coming from with this write...keep em' coming...
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