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Sleeping in Pain

Contributed by blueeyedevil13 on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:09:55 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I sit back
Alone and determined
Talking to myself
Silent and calm
Taking the blade
Making a slow
Line of bliss
Eyes roll back
Lips curve
Into a smile
My smile widens
Another line
Silent and calm
Remedy succeeding
Feelings fleeing
Numbness re-visits

Quietly replacing
My window
Out of insanity
It catches light
Flashing, blinding
In my eyes
A flare of truth
A flicker of reality

The blood
Hits the ground
As do I
Smiling
Grasping
For a hand
Help me out
Of this mess
White
Obscures my
Vision of gloom
I can no longer
Hear the voices
Tormenting
My mind
Pain becomes
Drowsy
As do I
Sleeping in
Pain

Copyright © blueeyedevil13 ... [ 2004-10-23 10:09:55]
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Re: Sleeping in Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:11:50 AM AEST
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i hope that one day your sleep will become peaceful, a strong write, filled with sadness and pain,

pixie xx

Re: Sleeping in Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:16:55 AM AEST
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Mixed feeling always make the best poems :) Great write.

Re: Sleeping in Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by OnlyInDeathITrulyLive on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:21:04 AM AEST
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wow, very powerful write. I wish you the best to get over your situations

Re: Sleeping in Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:52:55 PM AEST
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i love it

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