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Love
Contributed by
OnlyInDeathITrulyLive
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Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:10:37 AM in AEST
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Love is bitter
Not like a child playing with glitter
Love is not sweet
When you buckle in defeat
Love is sad
With love there is no reason to be glad
Love causes pain
Like standing naked in acid rain
Love tends to burn
When that love is not returned
Love hurts
Like getting pelted in the face with dirt
Love is terrible
It is so completely unbearable
Love sucks
But who gives a ....................
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Re: Love
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by RhythmBndt on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:20:34 AM AEST
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| I couldn't agree with that poem more *HUG* |
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Re: Love
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by pixie on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:33:55 AM AEST
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love is so very powerful, can be painful but also can be very rewarding,
*hugs*
takecare
pixie xx
a very good write btw |
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Re: Love
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:32:13 AM AEST
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I really hope you don't really feel that way.. Love can be an amazing experince with the right person you express it with.. But when you deal with the wrong person and you give them you're all and at the end you wound up with a crushed heart.. That's when you're poem hits in and then you can say love sukz.. But i know one day you will look back on you're write and laugh for min or so, because you will realize it's not true.. I hope one day you will find that true love and you will see what i am talking about.. You have a lot of tension with love.
PS. This is a great write tho love how you rhyme I LOVE THAT keep writing looking foward for more of you're writes they are interseting
HeNo UnKNOWn BuTtErfLY |
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Re: Love
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by lovingkk05 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:46:56 PM AEST
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| Love is only what you let it be |
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