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My Demons
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:12:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My demons will never leave,
They stay around to make sure I grieve,
Following me around like a deadly mist,
Making sure my heart never again gets kissed.
No matter what I do I cant ever escape,
I will forever suffer pillage & rape,
Not from that of a manly form,
But from something which causes much more harm.
I see my demons they keep my awake,
Promising that my soul they will take,
Their voices haunting my once stable mind,
Searching for scraps of sanity to find.
There is no way that they can be killed,
Not by murder of with an iron will,
I have tried so many times before,
But they just laugh & toss me to the floor.
I cant always see them but I feel their breath,
It smells so rotten & indicates death,
Most of my life is spent it total fear,
As I can hear them always screaming into my ear.
Telling me that my time is almost upon me,
I must die as thats the way its meant to be,
I have no choice I no longer deserve to live,
That they have a gift of eternal hell to give.
Demons have been with me most of my life,
Sometimes their wicked words live in a knife,
Begging me to pick it up & end it all,
I can hear them behind me wishing me to fall.
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Re: My Demons
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by immortal_pain on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:41:02 PM AEST
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| Beautiful I loved it. It showed shear fear of depresssion and how you can not get rid of your sadness, and how the thoughts of death creep up in your mind. |
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Re: My Demons
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by Live2Die on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:36:47 PM AEST
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| This is a really really good poem. *clapclapclap* very good job indeed. |
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Re: My Demons
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:11:26 AM AEST
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LET ME JUST SAY THAT WAS REALLY WRITTEN WELL! A GREAT REFLECTION OF YOUR DEEPEST PROBLEMS!! I HAVE SOME OF THE SAME THAT KEEP ON COMING & BOTHER ME UNTIL I'M GAME!!! BUT IF I CAN REACH INTO THE STRENGTH OF A SINGLE HEARTBEAT I MIGHT JUST BE ABLE TO FIGHT THEM OFF UNTIL ANOTHER TIME!!!!
SOUNDS LIKE YOU GOT THE GUTS & THE POWER TO MAYBE TURN THEM OFF,& I WISH YOU ALL THE LUCK I CAN!!!!!
Lots Of Love~DAN!!!!!!
P.S. I CAN'T TELL YOU WHAT I RATED THIS BUT I'LL GIVE YOU A LITTLE HINT . . . . . IT'S A NUMBER BETWEEN 4 & 6 !!!!!!! |
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Re: My Demons
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:55:07 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. The only way to get rid of them is with God's help. Great write.
Spazzo |
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Re: My Demons
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by venkat on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:32:03 PM AEST
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| dark..but hauntingly beautiful..hugs :-) venkat |
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Re: My Demons
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:45:57 AM AEST
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| Pixie, I hope you don't do anything to hurt yourself. Let God help you. This is such a dark write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: My Demons
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:45:25 PM AEST
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| such a dark writing, but beautifully put. i hope those demons leave you alone |
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Re: My Demons
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:31:04 AM AEST
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| good write them demons suck |
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