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Gone
Contributed by
Quilla
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Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 06:33:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I see you standing there Peering with your ice cold glare Staring at me Looking into me Finding an empty soul But a heart of gold Free of guilt Never done wrong Fear of pain Hiding all along Writing on my walls Working through it all Life depicted in pictures Nothing good at all Loving without restraint Killing without remorse To be with the one I love All part of my life's course Now there is nothing Silence Complete silence Darkness Empty Gone All gone Giving up without him Nothing left to live for Gone
......Gone......
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2004-10-23 18:33:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:29:24 PM AEST (User
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Loved this.... your run-on lines add to the beauty of this poem..
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Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:50:31 AM AEST (User
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Cool peom
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