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deep beneath my skin
Contributed by
oneteartofellpain
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:16:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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deep beneath my skin lies the truth of who i am
if u see deep into my eyes ull see my soul which has fled my body
if u kiss me ull taste the sweetness that wasonce with me
if u take time to know me ull see i was once alive
now u sit there-laugh n point at my *****(shiet) less life
i dont blame u for i gave up on myself too
i never thought i could be someone...
all i did was cut myself.
bled myself numb...
took as many pills as i could...
a coward indeed i am...
i admit to my mistakes....
NOW will u admit n say u took my life away?
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2004-10-24 03:16:59]
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Re: deep beneath my skin
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:12:04 AM AEST
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I like this one, its full of emotion and powerful words. Great Write
Take Care
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Re: deep beneath my skin
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 01:51:45 PM AEST
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this is beautiful! full of feeling, and wonderful word choice.
great write
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