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The valley
Contributed by
loopylou
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 05:05:05 AM in AEST
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oops
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I walk this valley
i walk it so much
the hills whisper my name
but the darkness is such a bare touch
my legs
they know these paths
always choosing the same direction
walking to my fait
i know only to well
hope is gone
and its to late
you, you scarem my name
but you dont listen
so now i do the same
this is no place to let my mind wander
amoungst theses dead leaves
past these killed memories
with the living i need to be
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-10-24 05:05:05]
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Re: The valley
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:07:31 AM AEST
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This is brilliant, some vivid imagery there with some powerful words and emotions.
Great Write
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Re: The valley
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:32:53 AM AEST
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Good write, cool poem.
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Re: The valley
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by Row on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:33:14 AM AEST
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very nicely written, good use of.. stuff and.. yeah
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