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broken smile
Contributed by
the_fallen
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:20:45 PM in AEST
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I walk across the road as I gaze at the stars
I hear movement from the bush
Go to the bush and find a boy
I see him with a smile, but not a happy one
He looks at me with his crimson eyes
And says, Im sorry, I so very sorry,
The smile was gone and tears comes down his face
I look at the ground confused
I look at the boy and he starts to tremble and smile that smile
The smile of sadness, the smile of corruption
A broken smile
Then he grab mine arm and pulled me closer
And he said, sorry over and over
After that he begins to disappear in the darkness
And that was then I realize that that boy was I
The boy with the broken smile
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2004-10-24 15:20:45]
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Re: broken smile
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by anonymussme on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:32:41 PM AEST
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| i didnt quite understand it yet that made me like it that much more, it confused me and made me think yet it was a good poem. great write |
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Re: broken smile
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:15:14 PM AEST
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| very intresting it was a good poem i like the ending |
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