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lake of tears
Contributed by
the_fallen
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:56:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sit next to the lake
And wonder why it was called the Lake of Tears
I look in the water
And saw sadness in the water
Faces and voices starts appear in my head
I hear a sound ahead and I look up
I see a boy filled of pain and goes in the water
Never coming out, I search down in the water to find him
A see light in the water and I swim to it
Suddenly I get out the water
And saw a world no one haw ever seen
And there stands the boy waiting
He stares at me then runs
I follow him, but I always lost him
But still I was able to find him
He leads me through places I never seen
Finally he stops at a lake and cries
There in the lake lies his hopes and dreams he could never complete
He looks at me and gets up
He grabs my arm and pulls me close
Then he jumps in the water pulling me in with him
Then I realized I was back where I was
Sitting next to the lake
But now it was different
Now I know why it was called the Lake of Tears
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