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The Wait...
Contributed by
searchingforlove
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:54:17 PM in AEST
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With eyes like warm pools of light
Encrusted upon the smooth round face like jewels, surrounded by the falling wisps of brown silk
Voice like a distant chiming of bells.
Her strange sense of maturity is sensed by those closest to her.
She is a subtle blend of creativity and intelligence
Surrounded by the golden warmth of family and friends
Yet her soul drowns in an ocean of her own sorrow
Yearning to be set free.
Her need greater than her want
that leaves her eyes scanning the path of destiny in search of her rescuer
A passion so great that it speaks for her stunned silence.
Yet she patiently waits
But will this wait ever be over
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Re: The Wait...
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:11:04 PM AEST
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| lovely, lovely poem... you know what you posess is of great value, and you long to share it... it will come at the right time... i'm waiting myself |
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Re: The Wait...
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:36:49 PM AEST
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| excellent write. the last stanza sums up life perfectly. |
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Re: The Wait...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:38:56 PM AEST
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Good use of similes and metaphors....
Loved it....
Jenni
Welcome to YPDC....the best poetry site on the net... |
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Re: The Wait...
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by a_bear on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:49:21 AM AEST
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| stunning |
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Re: The Wait...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 07:48:45 PM AEST
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My suggestion to you is just keep writing from your heart. This is a moving piece of work.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: The Wait...
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by sjoslin16 on
Thursday, 26th May 2011 @ 05:38:20 AM AEST
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| short and sweet with a great point...well done! |
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