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Paralysis
Contributed by
gurlg0newr0ng
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:02:52 PM in AEST
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The bitter numbness grows inside
It intwines as it spreads
it soaks in sickeningly slowly
until the paralysis takes over
more than just a state of mind
harder than rock, stronger than steel
cold and firm
forming a concrete wall around my heart
no feeling can penetrate
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2004-10-24 22:02:52]
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Re: Paralysis
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:26:07 PM AEST
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| fantastic and powerful write. |
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Re: Paralysis
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:02:21 PM AEST
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| Realistic and power, extreme visuals, and awesomely written and composed poem. |
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Re: Paralysis
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 01:36:39 AM AEST
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Great. Could be just me, but this poem made me think of apathy . . . do numbness and paralysis lead to it, or is it merely a by-product of them? Sorry to ramble; I'm in a philosophical mood. But anyhow (obviously) this poem made me think, and that's always a good thing. So, for that and more, nice job.
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Re: Paralysis
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by Sirena_Degana on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:15:26 AM AEST
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very strong emotions....
blessed be
sirena |
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