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Trust Thyself
Contributed by
theraven
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:33:31 PM in AEST
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Like waves breaking on the beach,
So your heart pounds in your chest
when he is near.
Feeling his love with your eyes
lets you forget your hesitancy,
releasing your fear.
A lingering thought, however, of
the one who burned you before,
whom you once held dear.
So holding back now, trembling
as you push him away, not
wanting to face these tears.
But suddenly you're embraced,
his arms gently rocking you,
letting you know he's sincere.
-The Raven-
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theraven
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2004-10-24 22:33:31]
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Re: Trust Thyself
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:35:18 AM AEST
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| awesome and passionate write, full of beautiful feelings and visual images, a cool poem well worth the read. |
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Re: Trust Thyself
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by a_bear on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:43:32 AM AEST
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| Trust your heart..hmmm. I could try that. Great write. |
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Re: Trust Thyself
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 01:21:07 AM AEST
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Wonderful! Truly, utterly, completely. There seem to be a great many beautifully romantic poems on the main page tonight . . . *feels lucky*. I love how your title relates to the poem, the unsaid words (if I'm making any sense at all, which is by no means a sure thing!). I feel just so lucky to have gotten the chance to come across this poem tonight. Fantastic poem.
--Nora |
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Re: Trust Thyself
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by Sirena_Degana on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 11:08:57 AM AEST
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oh...how i wish.....
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Trust Thyself
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:27:07 AM AEST
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| trust is hard to do, especially with experiences of the past lingering behind you, anyway Great write. |
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