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I Lose (I'm Human)
Contributed by
NickNamed
on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:05:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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take my pile of dirt
and make it clean
take my mess and
make it yours
I stand on the crying edge
and I can't see
what good that I can do
any way
so let me die
let me be in peace
I don't stand a chance
living here
oh no
I will lose again
and the pain follows me
and when the time comes
I know I'll lose
my resolution
so what use there
I can't make it fair
so what good is there
for me to live
you must take my life
make it yours
because in my hands
something good
just turns sand
I make love goodbye
I leave fun for pain
I drop good for gone
and leave me insane
Oh what good is there
when I can't be
when I can't be
true
Copyright ©
NickNamed
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2004-10-25 04:05:50]
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Re: I Lose (I'm Human)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:37:31 AM AEST
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I like this one, there's a lot of emotion in these words, I suppose there is always a reason for living, we just have to find it.
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Re: I Lose (I'm Human)
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by little_genna on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:57:27 AM AEST
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I really feel this poem. It holds alot of emotion of someone lost in life. I know I am lost in life. Keep writing this is good.
Peace be with you
Gen xx |
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Re: I Lose (I'm Human)
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by Stitch on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 07:56:44 AM AEST
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This is good...honest, raw, exploring a place few dare to go.
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Re: I Lose (I'm Human)
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by girish on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 08:31:56 AM AEST
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if these be your real emotions i am very pathetic about it see / read my poems your attitude is defenite to change
i have written poems on making possibilities of situations. i have made possible many a things with all my disabilities. i had a grave accident a death cum survival. now i am a B.com MBA GNIIT. my teachers felt even if i would cross my 7th standard when i had the grave accident in my 6th standard.
if your feelings are real my poems are your answer |
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