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Untitled
Contributed by
VWgurl
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Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tonight I looked up in the sky at the stars, though I
told myself I never would. You see for on each star
lies a memory with you, all too clear and all too good. When I used to look into your eyes,and you
looked into mine, I knew that if I looked up at the sky, I'd see those stars brightly shine. Your smile could light up a room, and make everyone stop and turn, and though you didn't know it, you were making my heart ache and burn. Everynight I thought to myself, "this is too good to be true" and one day it would end, and I'd have to forget about you. That day has arrived like I knew it would, yes, I am sad but I also have a feeling that's good. I am a stronger person because of this, but there are things both funny and sweet that i will and do miss. Thank you for helping me experiance what GOOD comes from love for a while, because tonight i got the courage to look up at the sky and smile.
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2002-11-17 17:00:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by Chrissylee on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 09:35:03 AM AEST
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it is great to be able to look back on love with memories and a smile...great write
peace love and happy poetry |
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Re: Untitled
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:23:38 PM AEST
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| Lost love and friendship is always hard to write about. Other than one of my own poems yours is the most positive I have seen yet. Thank you for that. |
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