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Blue Eyed Girl
Contributed by
sammydid
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:48:24 PM in AEST
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This is for you
Blue eyed girl who saw right through me
I wasn't any better
Not older, not wiser, just your equal
You know who you are
Brown eyed boy who pulled off my mask
and saw me how I was meant to be seen
And somewhere out there
Are you listening with a smile?
And now that you look back
Did I make that time worthwhile?
I hope I did
I owe you both so much
And I swear I'll pay you back
Next time we all go out, we're going dutch
This is for you
Blue eyed girl who saw right through me
I wasn't any better
Not older, not wiser, just your equal
You know who you are
Brown eyed boy who pulled off my mask
and saw me how I was meant to be seen
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sammydid
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2004-10-25 12:48:24]
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Re: Blue Eyed Girl
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by sicknivesevered on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 01:10:28 PM AEST
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| Wow - A poem about a relationship that ended where one is actually not upset. Yet, instead looks back with thanks and appreciation. A taste that I, myself have not come to acquire. I enjoyed reading it. Good job. (^_^)b |
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