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He Loves Me Not
Contributed by
Saz
on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 01:54:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He loves me, he loves me not
Not... why must my heart be shot?
A thousand knives ripping the skin
Not a cold heart, nor lead or tin
So the warm blood trickles from it
Like a bullseye arrow hit
Why must I suffer in pitiful pain?
My emotions torn, like acid rain
It burns a hole
In my sole
Unrepairable, with no cure
'He loves me not' I am sure
My heart is ripped, and torn from my chest
As you can see, I'm not at my best
But my mind is set
I must forget
The deadly rose
And the last petal I chose
I'll just sit here and rot
He loves me, he loves me not.
Copyright ©
Saz
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2004-10-25 13:54:52]
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Re: He Loves Me Not
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by sammydid on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:21:39 PM AEST
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oh my god! that was great! i would have never thought of this...
i *heart* your similies/ metaphors!
thanks for commenting on my un-worthy poem, -natalie |
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