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Goodbye

Contributed by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Ill never realise Im not worth you, not worth everything you tell me
See I know Im not good enough, I know im never good enough
And before I go I want you to know
That whatever happens, its not your fault.

Youre so beautiful, Im so cold inside
My hearts frozen from too much hurt
I cant let you know how much you mean to me
I dont want to make you feel any worse.

Cos I know you never really meant those words you said
I was just a comfort when things got hard
But if you ever feel like no one cares
Remember: I always did from the bottom of my heart

Sometimes, I want you so much it hurts inside
Sometimes, I hurt myself just to feel the pain
Sometimes, if I could, Id take all your tears and carry then for you
Cos Ive got nothing to lose now, nothing to gain

And all I want is to tell you that I Love You
All I want is a promise that youll never die
But instead, I sit here and cry for the self-worth I never had
Niall, Im so sorry, I never thought Id be the one to say goodbye.




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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_Angel_BabAy on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 03:53:11 AM AEST
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Thats a really great poem, I know how you feel about most of the things you said, it hurts alot, doesn't it?


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by shampoo_in_my_bed on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:17:06 AM AEST
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I could really feel the love in your words. but the pain totallly rained all over them. it makes me really want to know what happend. do you still feel it?
k.


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:47:21 AM AEST
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well, i love him. but sometimes, it all gets so hard and i can't stand to be here another day, and i hated life at that moment, and i went upstairs, and i took an overdose of paracetamol. it didn't work, and i'm still here, and i love him, but i hate it


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Chef-Boy-R-C on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 05:03:49 PM AEST
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My hat goes off to you. Nice write. Is there gonna be a conclusion?


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Unholy_Soldier on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 11:33:32 PM AEST
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I have posted a peom that will counter the way you feel. Because somewhere out there somone cares for you just as much as you care for him. And if ya ever need to talk about anything know that "A Dark Heart Crys" speaks to people like me and you. Would be such a waste to see your tallent leave. So always double check what your about to do because others will miss you.

A Fallen Knight,
Unholy_Soldier




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