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Happy Gashes
Contributed by
parkman
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:07:09 PM in AEST
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Slashes, slashes
Happy gashes
To my arm
I've done harm
To my stomach
Up and down
Looking at blood
I just frown
See me smiling
Very beguiling
As crimson red
Drips on my bed
Slashes, slashes
All these gashes
My page is blotted
With blood, clotted
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-10-25 14:07:09]
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Re: Happy Gashes
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by a_bear on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:36:44 PM AEST
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seeing red,
on the bed
can't think
so I just drink..
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Re: Happy Gashes
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by Stoney1 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:41:58 PM AEST
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I thought this was going to be a poem about jubilant women.
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Re: Happy Gashes
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:01:59 PM AEST
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I can't say I enjoyed this poem having been
there many times before it put some rather
vivid images in my head. I can relate to your
pain a lot if you wanna chat feel free to PM
me.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Happy Gashes
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by immortal_pain on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:19:48 PM AEST
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| i loved it. thats my inda of poetry. Are you a cutter? Your poem makes you out to be one. Im one as well... i fyou ever want to talk or anything just PM me I love making new friends ^_^ |
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Re: Happy Gashes
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:23:28 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very vivid. |
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