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The Long Kiss Goodnight
Contributed by
Starlilly
on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:30:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A night spent out with you
Makes my heart skip a beat
A smile is brought on by all you do
Excitement runs thru me each time we meet
My skin tingles as my neck your fingers trace
My stomach flutters as you lean in for a kiss
I get lost in the feel of your hands on my face
Your lips touch mine and I am propelled to pure bliss
You pull me closer and our bodies slightly touch
Feeling exstacy as your hands begin to explore
This is a passion I have longed for so much
Each kiss and grasp leaves me longing for more
I pull away and look deep into your eyes
You tell me sweet things that make me smile
One last kiss goodnight and I suddenly realize
I really hope you plan on being around a while
CopyrightRenee October 23
Copyright ©
Starlilly
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2004-10-25 14:30:40]
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Re: The Long Kiss Goodnight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:15:59 PM AEST
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This was lovely Star. Beautiful portrayal of those little butterflies
(that often feel like bats :P) and how they can send your heart reeling.
So sweet. Good luck!!!
~Breezy |
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Re: The Long Kiss Goodnight
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 03:10:06 AM AEST
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A wonderful write, flowing and very romantic, Renee! I hope you will find the happiness you deserve with this guy! 5 stars!!
Hugs,
Hur |
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