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Contributed by
Lone_er
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Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 06:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Teardrops
One silent teardrop
Trickling down her cheek
Said more to me
Than any words she might speak
It said I love you
How could you hurt me this way
It said I will always be here
Even if you go away
It said I still believe in you
Tho things may seem dark
It said even a teardrop
Cannot put out our spark
~~
Then I felt a teardrop
Falling from eye
It mingled with yours
Telling you that I
Am so in love with you
You take my breath away
It said I'm sorry I hurt you
With the stupid things I say
It said there could never be another
To ever take your place
It said I am never happier
Than when I feel your embrace
It said I pray you can forgive this man
For being insensitive and a jerk
It said I will make it up to you
No matter how hard I must work
~~
Two little teardrops
Speaking as one voice
Mingling in love
Together they rejoice
Russ
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Lone_er
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Re: No Title
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by OreO on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 02:40:37 AM AEST
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Well now there's 3 tears because
this one made me cry so hard
I really enjoyed reading this one
it's so sad and full of love, and pain
and hope and inspires me to beleive
that when someone says they are
sorry that they truly mean it. Thanks
for sharing this one, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: No Title
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 07:05:15 AM AEST
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Thank you for your kind remarks.
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Re: No Title
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 06:05:54 PM AEST
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| Wow ... this is beautiful and sensitive. Good write. |
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Re: No Title
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by Sarah22 on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 12:01:12 AM AEST
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im gald u
wrote this
poem it was
worth the reading. |
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Re: No Title
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by norm on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 10:55:55 AM AEST
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you are so right.. a simple device of the
female gender to weaken us big brave
yoyos. instead of a tear..give me a beer...
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Re: No Title
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by karoody on
Thursday, 11th September 2008 @ 07:34:00 AM AEST
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I really appreciated this. One of the closest relationships I have exists because we communicate like this. We know the power of silence. We know the power of love. We allow our souls to speak up once in a while. Cleans up the mess much faster. Thankyou...
Karoody |
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