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A Sleepless Reverie
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:30:03 PM in AEST
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You seemed to stop my breath
Make my dying heart
Beat more vigorously than before
My head, cradled in your arms
A sleepless reverie of you
Just to hear your voice
Would heal my wounds
Your love has changed me
Humbled me, made me happy
I hope I have had
The same effect on you
If I ever lost you
I think I'd still be happy
But don't get me wrong
I'd be crushed
But, still sort of happy
Because of the memory of your love
I can only wish that I'll hold it
Always and forever
Copyright ©
eyesxcriedxout1989
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2004-10-25 17:30:03]
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Re: A Sleepless Reverie
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by theMoth on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 06:32:06 PM AEST
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A very plainspoken
and sincere poem.
Nothing wrong with that.
--Mothy |
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Re: A Sleepless Reverie
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:33:53 AM AEST
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This is wonderful, beautiful.
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Re: A Sleepless Reverie
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:39:50 PM AEST
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| mason you always seem to be able to express love well. you are so mature for your age, it's just amazing how well you write and think about things, huge props and much love. |
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