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The Three
Contributed by
Quilla
on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:44:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Hate is strong
But not the strongest
Strong enough for me
Told not to hate anyone
But needing the feeling
Needing the strength
The wrong kind of strength
Terrible word, Hate
How to change such a feeling...
Never to change
Stand strong with the power
Be strong
Live strong
Only act strong
But alone......
Lonliness is strong
Stronger then Hate
Too strong
Overpowering
Don't like it
Don't want it
Love......?
Love is the strongest
Best of all
Not overpowering
Seep up the feeling
Keep it safe
Lock it away
Throw away the key
Wait.....
Someone found it?
Really?
Love......
Copyright ©
Quilla
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2004-10-25 17:44:02]
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Re: The Three
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:11:26 PM AEST
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| great write. the only problem i see with this is how it jumps from verse to verse only being related to the topic for relevance. but i think i do that all the time, and im just being a hypocrite =] i thought you presented the concept well. i had to take a step back and actually see how it is true, since ive never seen it in that perspective. keep up the great writes =] |
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