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Sherrie2
Contributed by
marsh62287
on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:12:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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that first moment
of that first day
i saw you
but didn't say hey
but i knew then
and i know now
that you'll be mine
forever somehow
for i know not
how to show you
that i love you
but i will show you
that every moment
of all my days
will be yours
i'll stand and chat
and admire every movement
that you make
every word
that you say
will be heard
and cherished in someway
for everyday
i stand without you
i'll understand
just how much you really mean
to me
so my life will be complete
and spend all moments
to the end
with you
so you can see
that i really do love you
Copyright ©
marsh62287
... [
2004-10-25 21:12:03]
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Re: Sherrie2
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:14:18 PM AEST
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| I read and I commented |
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Re: Sherrie2
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:15:19 PM AEST
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sorry, I had too.
As for the poem, very well felt, good flow to it, deffinetly one that I would recomend to people. Nicly done. |
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Re: Sherrie2
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by PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:24:37 PM AEST
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| wow this is just how i feel bout my soon-2-be bf. this poem is just awsome.... |
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Re: Sherrie2
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by PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:25:32 PM AEST
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| cool srry but this poem should not be the least read poem... i'll write more comments. |
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Re: Sherrie2
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by PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:25:52 PM AEST
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| wow |
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Re: Sherrie2
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by PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:26:34 PM AEST
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| extrordinary |
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