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Judged
Contributed by
marsh62287
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:22:43 PM in AEST
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deeply mourned and hurt
every moment cursed
for the Lord has took me in hand
and through me to the pits
undeserving of this matter
this God has judged me incorrectly
and given me absolutely nothing
of any illusion of a matter
so its time to walk away
and begin again
in some way
and then maybe
i will make it
to the end
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2004-10-25 21:22:43]
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Re: Judged
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:25:49 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very well written. i dont exactly agree with the concept of it. =/ |
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